The main feedback for this essay was that it needed more structure. I have highlighted each paragraph with a theme that it can be organised into.
Pink- Dada
Blue- Punk
Yellow- Advertising
Green- Appropriation
Last paragraph- Surrealism (should align with Dada)
Another aspect of feedback was that I should talk about more design work that involves collage, all the pieces discussed are more forms of art.
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